Friday, October 21, 2011

"Love your hair and it loves you back"

How I wish I were

Without my hair

I can't even dream of it

But Dove gives me a look petite

And as I lay in my couch

Cutting open the shampoo pouch

Yes, Dove adds a special touch

With its nourishment

And the vitamin's enrichment

I love to flaunt my hair

Showing its flair

Now no more whines

Because it makes my hair smooth and shine

No hair falls, no dryness

I really thank you your highness :)

11 comments:

Farila said...

That was a lovely poem

Anuradha Khanna Pentapalli said...

Sweet, simple and apt!

REFLECTIONS said...

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Arif said...

Wow Sangeeta! While everyone talked about the Dove shampoo pack, you were the first to talk about it's smaller offering - 'pouch'. As a Marketer that caught my attention & I really liked that. Feels like you actually sat on your couch with the pouch & blogged it then and there! Different, engaging, real, a +1 from me! :)

A.

REFLECTIONS said...

@ Arif, thanks for your comments. Feels really good that my poem seemed different and engaging and caught a marketer's attention

Well, this poem was just written in 5-10 mins (without sitting on a couch) and I am really glad that it is being appreciated.

Arif said...

@Sangeeta, talent comes in little bouts in those unplanned 5-10 mins! Keep writing. :)

Geeta Singh said...

lovely :) all d best!

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Saru Singhal said...

I like it, its really sweet and relevant...Beautiful play of words...:)

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