How I wish I were
Without my hair
I can't even dream of it
But Dove gives me a look petite
And as I lay in my couch
Cutting open the shampoo pouch
Yes, Dove adds a special touch
With its nourishment
And the vitamin's enrichment
I love to flaunt my hair
Showing its flair
Now no more whines
Because it makes my hair smooth and shine
No hair falls, no dryness
I really thank you your highness :)
11 comments:
That was a lovely poem
Sweet, simple and apt!
@ Farila
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Wow Sangeeta! While everyone talked about the Dove shampoo pack, you were the first to talk about it's smaller offering - 'pouch'. As a Marketer that caught my attention & I really liked that. Feels like you actually sat on your couch with the pouch & blogged it then and there! Different, engaging, real, a +1 from me! :)
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@ Arif, thanks for your comments. Feels really good that my poem seemed different and engaging and caught a marketer's attention
Well, this poem was just written in 5-10 mins (without sitting on a couch) and I am really glad that it is being appreciated.
@Sangeeta, talent comes in little bouts in those unplanned 5-10 mins! Keep writing. :)
lovely :) all d best!
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I like it, its really sweet and relevant...Beautiful play of words...:)
Well written poem :) Very nice article..
all d best wishes. :)
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